Words failed?No, not to you, beloved
Haughty to heartless,
You’ve hurled them all.
The unseen chain, the magic lock…
Ha! Fool said the girl in the mirror,
Tool, you snarled, sneering,
At the world you thought you own.
White powder, stainless satin, diamonds and rubies
How can I when I'm broken?
No, please, not the toughest heart,
Mine is not made of steel.
Buttons pressed, voice demanded,Angelic, droll…snapped…beasty,
A button pressed, voice deluded.
Still, tenacious, you hold that rein.
Condemned to infinite perpetuity
This knot, I curse.
Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today
To bury you... its your turn, deloved!
(Please note not all poems are autobiographical and this isn't one either, its inspired by a friend's experience and no, siani, its not you!! )
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ReplyDeleteI hope not :p
ReplyDeleteYou do write well my matee
@anon yes deliberately "d"
ReplyDelete@ku2 thank you hehe hope "not" meaning???
"we are here to bury you"- i hope NOT :p
ReplyDeleteWHOAH! Rin ai daih in i va lo deep ve... love this poem! :) No such word as "deloved" but thats exactly what makes this poetry so beautiful. No rules.
ReplyDeletePakhat chauh ka man loh... what or who did you mean by "Tool"?
okay, btw i like your theme
ReplyDelete@illu ehe! appreciate tak2 nge i post k fak hmasak vang??lol tool hi cu mom girl calls herself a fool but guy sneers back saying she's not only a fool, but also a tool and he's egotistically announcing this to the whole world never realizing he's only degrading himself...and so and so forth...nwys, poems are always sujected 2 interpretations, so, depends on how you see it...diklo tak2 omlo...ty 4 da compliment, inspiration that chuan awlsam tein k ziak ve mai thin but "block" hi k ngah xk ani, in every field.
ReplyDelete@ku2 ani chu mom bury tlak chauh mole ;)
ReplyDelete@anon thank you :)))
@illu leh loks "rin ai daihin" hmmmph
@ku2 Thiante ho chu in in ringhlel hlom om sap2 hehe sorry, you'd be glad to know she's not from T-35 ;) :)Ka ziak rum ve sia heheh
ReplyDeleteHappy Bday anih mai chu a!
ReplyDeleteAh, I see the moon. Thanx for explaining. Glad the tool you're talking about is not a man's ... you know. That's also called a tool :P
ReplyDeleteYeah, rin ai daih in. I always picture you to be this fun loving, love hating, BFF making, BF forsaking, happy go lucky down to earth kinda girl who would rather go out with her girlfriends to have a great time together laughing and joking, rather than go out on a romantic dinner alone with a guy.
Heh? Your birthday? HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOO! :D
ReplyDelete@illu Thrang khiuh2 i fel e lol :)cuan not everyone's imagination is as twisted as yours :O
ReplyDeletea themte mah ka hrethiam lova chuvang chuan KHB Hla no 267 "Ka sualte min tlen fai sak" tih thluk khan ka sa ta mai.
ReplyDeleteA hrethiam tan chuan a ngaihnawmin a hlu reuh ngawt ang :(
Alanis Morisette hla te pawh a nih duh hmel ka chhiar tha leh a. hehe.
ReplyDelete@Mos KHB Hla no 267 kha a ni reng lawm,ka letling ve a ka sap trawng thiam ang tawk in...Alanis Morisette pawn ka imagination i pirate min tia min sue dawn kha!!!
ReplyDeleteKa thling fan tur khawpa hriatthiam na neih a va chakawm ve :))
ReplyDeleteEhee..keipawh ka bo dawn viau chu le ka nau... Sorry that i totally forgot your b'day.. well, better late than never HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Keipawh karleh Tuesday nih kha, i theihnghilh chuan ka khai ang che.. KA NAU..
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